Wednesday, September 11, 2013

Wobbly Tooth

My   name   is   Shay   and   my   tooth  was   wobe    and  at  home    I  WOBDOD   my  tooth     and   ven   it  cam   at.

My name is Shay and my tooth was wobbly and at home I WOBBLED my tooth and then it came out.

by Shay


  1. Hi Shay

    Cool story! We liked that you used capital letters so we had to use a loud voice for the word WOBBLED. We liked hearing about your tooth coming out. Do you think the tooth fairy will come?

    From Weka Class

  2. What great writing Shay! Room 7


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