In St Vincent we have been working on understanding the writing process. This involves writing a draft, editing and publishing. Some of our year 3's wrote about the hockey tournament and the year 3's wrote about Cultural Day. We hope you enjoy reading our work.

Cultural Day - Our shared lunch

Cultural Day. Listening to Nicki and Cindy about the old Nelson

Cultural Day - Eating pancakes made by Miss Krista and Miss Emma

Photos of our fantastic swimming sports.

Ralph's Maths Test

Wow Ralph you got all your maths correct!!   Yes and I didn't even have my glasses on.

Tiddlywinks

Serious tiddlywinks Winks maths!! Carefully measured and marked out. Colour co-ordinated! FUN!!

Ralph's Santa Letter

Dear Santa,

I hope you have had a good year.

I do what I am told to do straight away.

For  crismis  i   Want  10 boxs. Of. Tas,pax. (

Love from ralph 

Dear Santa,

I hope you have had a good year.

I do what I am told to do straight away.

For  Christmas I would like 100 trash packs.

Love from Ralph 

Ralph's Convincing Letter

i    am            going to  share my ginger bread and sharing is good so please can  you hlp      me   . 

From Ralph

Ralph's April and Esme story

April and Esme's Mum and Dad did not want them to get the boy's tooth. April was seven and Esme was  was... I don't know.
Their wings ripped because of the wind.
Then the tooth bag was twirling around because of the wind.
They got to the house and  they found Daniel's tooth inside Daniel's room IN      A      kOOP       ANd     the     koop       had       sum          woter         in     the         koop.
(in a cup and the cup had some water in the cup.)
APriL        HAd          TO       WAth        IN     GAND   MRS      HAR.  
(April had to wade in Grandma's hair.)
.
By Ralph

Ralph's Weekend

hi        kinyi      i      wos             at      the       beach        and         i      sow     som     eone      i    
knew.

"HI KINGI!!" I was on the beach and I saw someone I knew so I yelled "HI!"

By Ralph

Broken Car

my              mums          car   broke down     because there was a noise chattering    and   me    and    breyrana         had    to    get     out   of the car.       My dad     came    and he had handy fingers so he made the car work again. there were also three gentle men who put the car on the side of the road.

By Ralph

Maui and the Sun

the       sun's lines look  kolleu      and are yellow like cheese. the lines    look like fire.  
 bi    ralph

The sun's lines look curly and are yellow like cheese. The lines look like fire.
By Ralph

My Weekend

In the   holidays   my   Mum said to me  "Ralph, come here. You know those shopping things you have at your school. I have some here!"

She had five for me and five for Brearna.

I unwrapped them myself and my favourite one was ALL OF THEM!!!

By Ralph.   

R ALH      IS       MI KEZ     FND.

By Ralph

Ralph is Ms Kelly's friend.

Ralph's explanation of a class game.

fosd               y o r        p o t       t h e       v l z           ae u ioaeiou    ono       conssooor

First you put the vowels A E I O U. Then the consonants.
By Ralph (he is explaining about our game called Build-A-House)