''MAUI!! YOU PLAYED TRICK'S ON ME!!!'' said the Goddess of Fire then Maui scrabbled home through the tiny fire that was getting drowned by the rain.
by Sam P and Ms Kelly
You use capital letters to show how the Goddess of Fire is yelling at Maui -that was a great way to get me hooked in to reading the rest of your story, Sam! From Ms Kelly
You use capital letters to show how the Goddess of Fire is yelling at Maui -that was a great way to get me hooked in to reading the rest of your story, Sam!
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